Thursday, July 11, 2013

"The Observation of Trifles" - Fine Detail in Granada's Series with Jeremy Brett as Sherlock Holmes.

David Burke & Jeremy Brett in "The Dancing Men" 1984 Granada Television.

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"You know my method. It is founded upon the observation of trifles." (BOSC).

I know I am not alone in often spotting some little treat I hadn't noticed before in a repeat viewing of one of Granada's classic episodes of Sherlock Holmes. They are truly evergreen.

The artistry of Jeremy Brett has much to do with this, but honours must surely be shared with some inspired screenplays and production values. Together they created what are at times masterpieces. As Holmes observes in the Epilogue to Valley of Fear: 'You can tell an old master by the sweep of his brush.' The closer you look at this series the more authentic and well-executed it appears.

With this post I am opening a place to collect some of this fine detail. I'll add to it as and when, advertising new entries.

Please feel free to contact me with contributions (especially perhaps if you don't blog). You'll retain copyright and I'll acknowledge you with the name or handle you choose.

As a working guide I'm simply looking to record little gems that are too long to deal with in tweets or on Facebook but don't warrant a full blog post. For example:

Trifle 1. The Curious Incident of the Page in The Resident Patient.


Dr. Trevelyan has sent urgently for Holmes, having found Blessington hanged in the night. Please watch on Youtube beginning about 30.00 noting Holmes' words and actions upon entering the dead man's hall.

There is no mention of the page at this point in Conan Doyle's original story. Granada has inserted a beautifully nuanced (and acted) piece of dialogue:

Brett as Holmes: 'Where is the page?'

Trevelyan: 'Nowhere to be found.'

Brett's business with the hat is crucial to the naturalness of his question. He takes it off, as is the custom, and, for an instant, holds it out, automatically expecting a page to take it. Another moment. His arm feels about for a surface on which to place the hat. Only then...realization in a fleeting sequence of superbly reproduced natural observations - his unconscious movements; the hat still in his hand; no page; why no page? Question uttered.

It's a tiny moment both of consummate acting and period authenticity. Pages were (ironically) constant invisible presences in such houses in this period. Subtly, the Granada team depart from Doyle to catch the very life of these people in this finest of detail.

The artistry of this moment lies in its sharpness of observation that mirrors perfectly a Holmes who (upstairs) will be on top detective form as, detail by 'trivial' detail, he reveals the true narrative of the night's events.

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Eric Porter as Moriarty by M. Sallier Gallicher 2007 (Wikimedia Commons).


Trifle 2. The Foreshadowing in The Red-Headed League.


Foreword.

Of the sixteen short stories and two novels missing from Granada’s project on the Canon, the absence of STUD and LAST is especially regrettable. To have seen Jeremy Brett portray the first and last of the chronological Holmes ranks as a pipe dream with viewing William Gillette in performance.

That Granada made no version of VALL disappoints for a different reason: only in the Canonical FINA and VALL does Professor Moriarty feature in person ( face to face with Holmes only in the short story).

There is much compensation, however, in John Hawkesworth’s dramatisation of  REDH (effectively Part 1 to his FINA).

REDH was Conan Doyle’s 2nd short story (pub Strand August 1891.
FINA was his 12th (pub Strand December 1893).

Granada broadcast them as episodes 12 and 13 to close The Adventures series (1984-5).

Departing from the Canon. Hawkesworth introduces Moriarty in REDH attributing to him  John Clay’s plan to steal the French gold and forward-planning the (non-Canon) theft of Mona Lisa enacted in Granada’s FINA.

These apparent departures from the Canon (order and content) exemplify filmic adaptation at its most inspired.

The adaptation is chronologically valid. Doyle’s Holmes speaks (on April 24, 1891) of (at the very least) three months trying to track down Moriarty; REDH is set in October, 1890.

The Foreshadowing.

Eric Porter’s Moriarty is woven seamlessly into REDH. He makes five appearances, graduated to a double-climax.
1. Just his hands (like claws) grasp the bank document dropped for his henchman by the inside man.
2. In profile only we watch him receive news that the business of the Red-Headed League is concluded & watch him study a map of Paris.
3. Briefly we see him by the bird of prey statue in his window as Holmes enjoys Sarasate; then check the bank plan as Holmes examines Watson’s identical blackboard sketch.
4. His full face is lit for the first climax- the reaction to Ross’s news of failure: “It won’t do”.
5. The episode’s final shot is of Moriarty spying on Holmes. The lizard neck moves in hatred, the live image intensifying to a permanent iconic pen-drawing as background to the final credits.

BUT I maintain he ‘appears’ a 6th time -  in the bank vault.

The trifle to observe in REDH is the use of shadow by the lighting director and Jeremy Brett as Holmes, Watson, Athelney Jones & Mr. Merryweather listen for Clay.

Please view this scene on Youtube from 33.00.

 


We are perhaps first aware of the dramatic value of sharply defined shadows when Holmes inquires whether there might be a special reason for choosing this bank to rob. It’s ominous.

There is an amusing, yet deadly serious moment where Brett retains one gold Napoleon in his black gloved hand while he presses an ear to a pillar. We recall with a smile how (similarly) he takes private pleasure in pocketing the Blue Carbuncle and the Borgia Black Pearl - so characteristic given Holmes’ repeated boast he would have made a formidable criminal.
 
More seriously, the single Napoleon pre-figures the Napoleon of Crime who will be described in the next vault scene.

Watch most carefully as Brett takes up his lecturing position against the whitewashed brickwork: ‘a mastermind has been at work.’

We now see the reasoning behind Brett’s choice of costume - he is at his most Dracula-esque as he describes Professor Moriarty, the script drawing on two paragraphs from FINA and ending with a Hawkesworth invention: ‘We shall not see the Professor tonight.’

But the viewer has. Throughout Brett’s monologue in close-up Holmes’ own shadow has effectively manifested Moriarty. The two men are as inextricably connected as Holmes is with his own shadow. The detective is momentarily near possessed (the Dracula image) by his arch enemy.

Brett is completely aware of the significance of the shadow business - watch his right hand as he ends the speech, raising the watch and masking the shadow. End of wonderfully trifling moment.

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Wednesday, July 10, 2013

Two Allegories About Education.

 
Arthur Miller’s play “The Crucible” and William Golding’s novel, “Lord of the Flies” frequently figure in ‘most significant’ and ‘top’ 10 or 100 surveys of modern ‘classic’ literature in English. As such. they are appropriate and popular texts for study in secondary and tertiary education. The former is based on historical court transcripts of the Salem witch trials; the latter is a work of imaginative fiction in the same genre of allegory, presenting, in the words of film director, Peter Brook, no less than ‘the potted history of man’.


Both works derive much of their dramatic impact from the depiction of children exercising powers generally reserved for adults in a society. In both cases the results are catastrophic and murderous.


The allegorical import of both works however creates the profoundest dimension of horror with the awful realisation that these children merely mimic and take their cue from those taller children we call adults who have temporarily lost their way. In the play, Abigail Williams only wields power because it is granted to her by Deputy Governor Danforth. She embodies what ancient Greeks would recognise as the inevitable and remorseless sentence of the Furies visited upon those whom the gods would destroy having first made mad. Head chorister, Jack Merridew, is similarly let off the leash to cause havoc once wholesome mature guidance and example are withdrawn. Both are Frankensteinian creatures brought into existence by societies that have lost true perspective. In both cases the real  children the characters represent are grown, but immature adults whose warped values necessarily infect those who look to them for education.
 
'The Remorse of Orestes'. Bouguereau 1863.


Writings cast as allegory are more accurately only potentially allegorical until their lessons are learned. The saddest irony is to be found in an unenlightened reading or teaching of such books. That would be a derisive, pointless activity.  


The universality of these works renders them a constant threat to the status quo (or desired) because each provides a neutral template for illuminating reflection and the clear-sighted diagnosis of social ills. It is an unfortunate reality of life that this is not always welcomed or comprehended as necessary. Great works of literature raise questions (are questions) and it is no surprise that sometimes they are burned. More often their potency is emasculated by the stifling embrace of ‘Classic’ status. Shakespeare, Dickens and Orwell have their stings sheathed by such fulsome approbation.


Those who will not or cannot see the educational relevance of MY BLOG references to ‘Lord of the Flies’ or Sue Cowley’s recent post 'THE CRUCIBLE' may ‘know’ both texts well but effectively jettison their raison d’etre. Neither of us is providing literary allusion for dramatic or decorative effect: we are finding inspiration for the most vivid expression of certain perceptions about teaching and learning for which conventional educational discourse is proving inadequate.


Their heightened awareness of its variant uses often naturally leads our best writers to treat language thematically. Orwell’s Newspeak and Burgess’ Nadsat are extreme examples of imaginative visions that required full blown invented languages to enact the invasive, thought-changing power of imposed ways of communicating. Brian Friel’s play “Translations” examines the impact of Royal Engineers on an Irish community as they lodge in a village researching the apparently innocuous task of drawing up the first Ordnance Survey. As the age-old. (largely oral) labels for local geography are formalised into either absurd ‘Irish’  or bland, unashamedly English  place names it becomes apparent we are witnessing nothing less than that most insidious invasion of all - denial of identity.


Old Francis Nurse and John Proctor would weep at Friel’s play set in 1833. It would seem to them that no one had learned the lesson of 1692.


The language of Miller’s play is unique and should not be mistaken for the mere recreation of authentic-sounding late 17th Century Massachusetts English. The religio-legal language of affidavits and court inquisition that permeates Danforth’s every sentence is a moveable prison, limiting freedom of expression to a single imposed language. The Deputy Governor is precisely right when he explains to a naive Francis Nurse:


“But you must understand, sir, that a person is either with this court or he must be counted against it, there  be no road between. This is a sharp time, now, a precise time - we live no longer in the dusky afternoon when evil mixed itself with good and befuddled the world. Now, by God’s grace, the shining sun is up, and them that fear not light will surely praise it.”


Nurse’s naivety and ignominious muting are highlighted in order that an audience may experience the full impact of a central expression of Danforth’s madness that drips with irony for there is no sun in a total eclipse.


In the succeeding Act 4, John Proctor reluctantly signs a confession to witchcraft but refuses point blank to give it to Danforth to display on the church door, saying, ‘You are the high court, your word is good enough! Tell them I confessed myself’.


The representative of established power genuinely does not understand the existential anguish that climaxes in Proctor’s destruction of the signed confession and retrieval of  ‘ some shred of goodness’. Miller’s audience is more enlightened IF it understands John Proctor’s cry: Because it is my name! Because I cannot have another in my life!’


Sue Cowley’s post ends with the Reverend Hale’s expression of personal rebellion against a compulsory regime he can no longer in good conscience espouse. Both denounce proceedings - Hale of a court, Cowley of a curriculum.


These regimes are alike in that they impose the singular on the plural - one approved uniform prescriptive notion with its own lingua franca that nudges to one side the native, simpler vernacular. A cursory analysis of the contrasting languages of Danforth/Hathorne with Corey/Proctor illustrates the phenomenon. Both are ‘English’ but the former promoted with such blinkered zeal that the latter is disenfranchised.


A sampling of education blogs and tweets displays this linguistic scenario. People speaking the same mother tongue, involved in a common sphere of activity, completely unsurprisingly are performing a passable impression of the Anglo-Irish pale and the territory beyond. At  times they are mutually unintelligible.I find reason for optimism in this apparent negative.


The fracturing of discourse is an early consequence of the unnatural dominance of a single imposed notion. In the current phase of curriculum change its proponents naturally invoke the authority and language of educational research for justification, explanation and application. The expression of opposition through that language (ie: traditional forms of debate and argument) proceeds at a disadvantage and is limited (by being already appropriated) to, at best, a Reverend Hale-like line of argument ( I mean before his denunciation).


This VIEW from an educational researcher seems to me to exhaust what recourse is available with which to articulate opposition to Mr. Gove’s reforms by way of academic argument. The writer’s central theme is expressed in the concluding paragraph’s wise advice that the always provisional,  ever-evolving ‘findings’ of academic research are not designed to be cherry-picked, let alone imposed as if they were mined eternal truths. This courteous, scholarly statement will go unheeded: we cannot expect research to do our (teachers’) professional work for us’.


This researcher does not delineate (but I bet realises) the logical consequences of imposing a core curriculum on the nation’s children. The imposition trains a generation of common core teachers, of common core employers, of common core parents, of common core future adults...and renders broad educational research effectively redundant. Why maintain current funding of university education departments when discarded notions are effectively of mere academic interest in the new dispensation? No wonder those very institutions have been criticised; no wonder Mr. Gove believes teachers would be better trained in schools. No wonder the very literary classics that carry the potent juice of self-determination are hugged to the body politic of the new national curriculum to be experienced only in rigorously controlled conditions.
 



Because the Head Gardener (I reference Shakespeare’s ‘Richard the Second ‘here) has selected, sanctioned and financed the full flowering of, as it were, one species of plant in the Garden of Education all others are crowded out or eradicated as weeds. The long-term impact on flora, fauna and land fertility are easier to appreciate than the legacy of such a poorly judged policy.


There are those who will maintain strategically or genuinely they just do not see what the fuss is about. This is why a healthy society values its writers - they see what the rest of us miss, hide or ignore.


What IS this retired English teacher gassing on about? Leftist nonsense! Conspiracy theorist! Liberal wool merchant! What’s it to do with him anyway? This isn’t an argument! Bloody presumptuous if you ask me!


If such responses to my post are factional or flippant in motivation, I have no time for you. If  honest, my thanks! I see where you are. Not a problem for me. If far better writers than I  have failed to alert you to real and present dangers, I can hardly expect success. Shakespeare might be worth a look.


30 years teaching English, almost always to A level made Shakespeare a constant presence in my interaction with students. It is my fervent prayer that the teaching of common core Shakespeare will involve exploration of the full allegorical reach of that playwright’s consideration of kingship which is not restricted to the nature of monarchy.
 
Henry Bolingbroke becomes Henry 4.


Something irrevocable, almost mystical, occurs when a person is crowned.. Shakespeare’s kings are not the real ones of history: they are dramatic personifications of ideas, notions. At the heart of Henry V or Richard the Second is a fascination with what happens when an idea is invested with all the powers of state - when, allegorically speaking, for example, a common core national curriculum theory about education is officially endorsed and implemented as policy.


‘Courtiers’ may mutter for or against the new king but his status has all the trappings and certainly of a fait accompli. Similarly, the state’s adoption of a theory changes its status to a political and social reality. Theoretical argument becomes academic.


So what do you do? In Shakespeare we see (sometimes as in The Winters Tale only after many years) the process of wholesome rebirth after a period of social winter in another country, on an island, in the Forest of Arden or a wood outside Athens. Nature redivivus.  The resumption of natural rights and liberties. Such was the case, eventually, in Massachusetts.


What can we do when the very language of conventional discussion falls on deaf ears? Some. like me, construct a dumb-show (like this), hold as ‘twere the mirror up to nature and hope it will catch the conscience of the king.


Others I see already falling back on vernacular, abandoning the official lingua franca. Good for them! You cannot express frustration, indignation, foreboding or sadness in better language. It may make for uncomfortable reading. I say bring it on. The Danforths and Jack Merridews of 2013 will drown your voice as surely as Francis Nurse and Piggy are scorned to silence.  But ‘The Crucible’ shows in the weights piled upon Giles Corey and the execution of John Proctor that the retention of personal honour is possible, profoundly difficult and, in the long term, the most natural and democratic of victories.


Most people are not well versed in debate nor given to intellectual discourse. Nor have people always the time or energy to muster sophisticated argument. I must tell you, on my island this is no obstacle to participation. The reader will know people as I do who are readier to validate the instinct of their pet animals than human instinct or intuition. Many students, teachers, parents and educationists will be experiencing confusion and almost inexpressible personal conflicts. This is simple decency - a concern for the harmonies of everyday life.
 
David Bradley as Billy in 'Kes' 1969 Kestrel Films Ltd.


Billy’s astounding eloquence in Barry Hines’ novel, ‘A Kestrel for a Knave’, (don’t pass over the title too quickly), illustrates what teachers know well - that facility of expression is non-linear; that interest, enthusiasm, complete engagement, owned knowledge can overcome an intimidating setting and stream the pure waters of vernacular expression through which Nature provides us all with an unforced artistry.


I tend to see things simply these days - if something feels amiss it probably is. And in listening to the voices commenting on curriculum reform I am most attentive to those addressing the virtual assembly from a position of disadvantage most usually the case with practising teachers who feel so strongly that somehow they find the time and energy to blog after long days of complete absorption in rooms full of children. Intuitively they sense something seriously amiss. I am guessing why in identifying the compulsory nature of proposed detailed core knowledge and its attendant assessment regime.


Sue Cowley is certainly concerned that the transmission of a circumscribed body of knowledge deemed more important than the general pool will become an end in itself, valued only for its provision of neat, but educationally suspect ‘evidence’ for assessment AND that not even this core knowledge will be learned within meaningful, relevant contexts.


She is precisely right.

Jack Merridew & Ralph. Lord of the Flies 1963. Two Arts Ltd.

What I write next is devilishly difficult to word because I have to find the simplest unmissable formulation. Ralph has this problem in preparing to speak to the Assembly after the Beacon Fire was neglected for a pig hunt and a ship passed unaware of their plight:


“The thing is: we need an assembly.”

No one said anything but the faces turned to Ralph were intent. He flourished the conch. He had learnt as a practical business that fundamental statements like this had to be said at least twice, before everyone understood them. One had to sit, attracting all eyes to the conch, and drop words like heavy round stones among the little groups that crouched or squatted. He was searching his mind for simple words so that even the littluns would understand what the assembly was about. Later perhaps practised debaters—Jack, Maurice, Piggy—would use their whole art to twist the meeting: but now at the beginning the subject of the debate must be laid out clearly.
“We need an assembly. Not for fun. Not for laughing and falling off the log”—the group of littluns on the twister giggled and looked at each other—“not for making jokes, or for”—he lifted the conch in an effort to find the compelling word—“for cleverness. Not for these things. But to put things straight.”  (from Chapter Five - Beast On Water).


If I have made any new friends thus far by this post I may lose some of you now - but I have to say this.


I’ve spent long hours with teachers anxious to prepare as thoroughly as possible before teaching something to someone. At times so voluminous is the accreted paraphernalia of lesson plans, aims, objectives, strategies, good practice, interventions, targets, standards, pre-assessments, assessment points and post-assessment evaluations  that I have had to bite my tongue not to inquire: “And when do you propose to actually begin teaching a student?”


I could never have brought myself to utter what I have no compunction in saying now - “I have to conclude from your unremitting focus on the theory of teaching and learning that you find it more interesting than spending time with children.”  When such a teacher enters a classroom faith has been vested unrealistically in a paper fantasy ill -equipped to flex to the succession of living moments constituting a lesson. Far from being preparation for effective educating, such luggage dragged into class vitiates by monopolising the teacher’s attention.


You can only focus on one thing at once.If you try to drive a car while reading the handbook you’ll come a cropper.


What this barely caricatured teacher does not know is what Sue Cowley certainly does. Children of all ages AND adults of all ages warm to natural vernacular interaction. Establish that and the business in hand may proceed. If it’s not done genuinely we know it and conclude we are being patronised or ignored or simply overlooked by a teacher concerned only to honour plans and theories that should have been left outside the classroom door.I might add that most children are admirably patient and courteous in receipt of such treatment.


The saddest irony in this scenario lies in the unvalued presence of the two richest resources for meaningful educational experiences - pupils and a teacher. The first expects to be observed, considered, listened to, anticipated, understood (especially when he or she is most confused) and acknowledged (rightly here) as the centre of attention.


On the teacher’s part (we know this from improvising cover lessons at a moment’s notice) a light overnight bag containing sufficient relevant hard content for the session within a flexible framework suffices. This is actually the catalyst for learning experiences, nowhere near an end in itself. Meaningful learning is remembered because it is natural and is activated by fluid, intensive, informed, very skilful real-time assessment by the teacher of what is really happening in individual students’ minds. Based on this continuous assessment the teacher’s greater knowledge and experience has to be trusted by all present (especially the teacher) so that it may be freed to flow unforced as colours suffuse the screen (and Dorothy) in MGM’s land of Oz. Every lesson we should expect and embrace the opportunities presented by the unexpected. That’s what real people are - unique as uncollected, unpinned, unclassified, wild butterflies.


I was unconscious of that simile whilst typing just now. Absorbed teaching is thus and I miss it. If you find yourself asking a class - ‘What did I just say? I haven’t a clue. Did it make ANY sense?’ that’s just one of the shared joys - because it made so much sense even you, the speaker, was momentarily spell-bound by classroom magic.


John Proctor is hardly aware of the words that come unbidden to express his final redemptive moment. ‘Goodness’ and words melt surreally into each other: ‘Not enough (goodness) to weave a banner with, but white enough to keep it from such dogs’.


Blog reader! What did i just say? I haven’t a clue. Did it make ANY sense?


I shall close this post with the last words of Miller’s play. Elizabeth Proctor is speaking of her husband. Please read it twice, first with John Proctor in mind; then think of any child of your choice and pray things can be put straight  before it’s too late.


‘He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!’
 
Dorothy & Friends in 'The Wizard of Oz' 1939 MGM.

Tuesday, July 2, 2013

"Death By Sherlock" - The Thames Ditton Tragedy of 1894.

The Cemetery, St. Nicholas Church, Thames Ditton, Surrey.


 
One of many headstones still standing in the grounds of the Norman church of St. Nicholas,Thames Ditton, Surrey, marks the grave of a young Australian. His name was Lloyd Burdekin and he died in Thames Ditton, aged 20, just before Christmas. 1894.

Lloyd, an Oxford scholar, had lodged alone in the house of Mr. & Mrs. Fiveash for nine months, some time after dropping out of university. His premature death was reported at length in several Australian and New Zealand newspapers.

This post presents a transcript of the South Australia Chronicle's report of Saturday 9 February, 1895. I have introduced its penultimate paragraph from an otherwise identical report in "The Star" of February 8.
The original may be viewed HERE

The Transcript.

 
AN AUSTRALIAN'S SUICIDE.


'DIED FROM AN OVERDOSE OF SHERLOCK HOLMES.'

[From our Special Correspondent.]

London, December 29, 1894.

The sensation of this dolorous Christmas season from, an Anglo-colonial point of view is the suicide of young Lloyd Burdekin, who shot himself at his lodgings at Thames Ditton last Thursday under somewhat remarkable circumstances.
 Deceased was the son of Sidney Burdekin, said to be 'the well-known New South Wales millionaire,' and had, so far as can be ascertained, no earthly reason for wanting to take his life. He possessed plenty of money, was described by the manager of the Bank of New South Wales at the inquest as 'a careful, cautious boy, who had never had any troubles, financial or otherwise,' and seemed absolutely sane.
 His landlady said Burdekin had lived' at Thames Ditton nine months, was reserved and quiet in demeanour and habits, and drank only milk. She knew of no young woman in whom he was interested.
 Burdekin suffered badly from cacoethes scribendi, and left behind an enormous number of letters, in which morbid vanity and a desire to pose as an individual with a Sherlock Holmesian mind are leading characteristics. It looks, indeed, from the epistles read at the inquest, as though a too ardent appreciation of the works of Dr. Conan Doyle had turned Burdekin's brain.
 Deceased must have begun by planning how he would commit suicide so as to mislead people supposing he should ever desire to make away with himself. The more he thought about it the more (no doubt) he became enamoured of the scheme. At length its actual execution began to tempt him, and then the lad's brain, which can never have been strong, must have given way.
 Before shooting himself he wrote a big batch of letters. Two were to his parents. They were very brief, the lad merely asking for forgiveness from ''the dearest and sweetest of parents,' and saying that he left a full statement for them through Mr. George. In a letter to that gentleman the deceased said:

'December 19, 1894. Dear Mr. George— I have taken my life with my own hands in perfect sanity of mind. Directly Mrs. Fiveash discovers my body I have left the strictest orders that you shall be telegraphed for at once. When you arrive I wish you to take supreme control, both of the matters relating to the death and also of all my own personal affairs. With regard to the death I have taken my life deliberately, and have carefully planned so that the manner of the death itself may be thought a pure accident by the world. I wish the verdict of the jury to be 'Accidental death,' so as to spare my family from the name of suicide.
 When you enter this house first see the body, leaving it untouched, and the things lying around undisturbed. This is very important for the theory of accident Then carefully read these letters and arrange the line of policv you mean to carry out. Dr. Starkey, a very able man, and one in whose judgement my parents place the greatest reliance, will be telegraphed for at the same time as you are. He is a man of the strongest common sense, and will give you great help and loyal assistance in the matter. Read the letters carefully.
 In one letter you will see the whole theory of the accident as it is to be placed before the court, the press, and the public. Read that letter as you stand by the side of the dead body. It is the chart explaining the position of the body, and of the details lying around. It is as though the silent mouth were to open and to tell you the whole affair. You will not be able to understand it unless you do as I wish you ; that is, read it beside the body and follow every line as though it were a plan, and you will find that it corresponds exactly to what you see before your eyes.
The letter itself— in fact, all these letters — must be kept a profound secret from the public and the press. The death itself must be thought entirely unpremeditated ; in fact, every circumstance of the case has been planned with -the purpose of seemingly contradicting flatly any idea of suicide, and to throw dust in the eyes of. the public. The letter itself must be shown to Dr. Starkey and to the lawyer employed in my defence, and to no one else.
Before you leave this house, dear Mr. George, talk the matter over with the lawyer and Starkey. Decide what is best to be done, and carefully arrange the one simple line of policy you mean to carry out. Mrs. Fiveash can be implicitly trusted, and will give you great help. Make her thoroughly understand how important it is that there should be no gossip until after the verdict of the inquest. A verdict of accidental death should be very easy to win. Every single circumstance seems to point to it, if you can only stop the Fiveashes from gossiping. Tell them that they must have no knowledge of these letters ; that the telegram dispatched after my death must have been sent of their own free will from knowing that you and Starkey were my only friends. Tell them not to talk about this affair, to keep the neighbours, journalists, police, &c, out of the house, and that the public must think that it was a pure accident. Sir George Lewis is the proper lawyer for the case.- For God's Sake keep the case from all scandal. I can give you no more counsel about my death. The affair is before you, and you must do as you think best.”

The letter concluded with various instructions as to the disposal of his property. So that it should not be thought that he had no money he asked that the amount of £25. for which he-was indebted to his landlady, should be paid to her from his own account at the bank. His jewellery, books, clothes, &c, he bequeathed to various people, and he finally asked that all his papers should be destroyed, and on no account be allowed to get into the hands of strangers.

Emma Fiveash, of Fern cottages, Western green, Thames Ditton, stated that deceased had lodged with her since March, 1893. He. was reserved, but she had never noticed any thing strange in his behaviour. On Wednesday night she left him writing letters, and when she saw him in the morning he was still writing. He had been up all night. He had arranged to go to London, and about half-past 1 she went to ask him by what train he was going, and found him lying on his side on the floor, in front of the dressing table, with a wound on his forehead. There was a revolver beneath him. He was not dead, and she sent for Dr. Senior, who attended him until he died at half-past 9 the same night.
 There were three or four papers pinned to the looking-glass. One of them contained instru tions for her to telegraph to Dr. Starkey and Mr. George to 'come immediately to Lloyd Burdekin' who was 'seriously ill'. Another paper contained most minute and detailed instructions as to what she was to do on hearing the explosion in order to promote the impression that death was the result of a pure accident. Witness had no idea that deceased contemplated suicide.

The coroner read the letter, which began as. follows : —

'Dear Mrs. Fiveash — I have committed suicide, but for the honour of the family it must be thought an accident. I have carefully planned the affair so that the press and public will think that death was a pure accident, caused by carelessly handling the revolver and the trigger catching in the boot laces. I have chosen the very time when everything will favour this idea. My break fast will be waiting on the sitting-room table. My clothes will be brushed and packed up as if to start for London. I shall be discovered sitting half-dressed on a chair before the looking-glass, with the drawers of the dressing table open before me. Out of the drawer I shall have taken a pair of gloves, and on the glass will be a bootlace, with the end very furry. The bootlace is very important ; remember that on the bootlace hangs the whole theory of the accident. The theory I wish to make the public and the press believe is this — I shall be found sitting dead. My left hand will lie pressed into a boot, out of which I have taken the bad lace and replaced it by a new lace, which will be found threaded into two or three lace holes of the boot. All bootlaces are kept in the revolver drawer. Seeing the revolver, which is supposed to lie unloaded, in the drawer, I have stopped lacing the boot for a moment, and so have taken out the revolver with my right band to look at it. Suddenly the thought has flashed across my mind of the toy; pistol fatality of Clapham last week, in which Miss Cayzer shot herself accidentally, and about which I have spoken to you several times. You must remember this carefully, as it clearly shows that I believed my revolver to be empty, and to support that view of the case I have taken care that there shall be only one cartridge in the barrels. Thinking of this Clapham case, I carelessly place the revolver against my right temple. Some of the laces in the drawer, I must tell you, tangled round the trigger and hammer of the revolver. It will never be known whether my finger pulled the trigger or whether the laces pulled hack the hammer, but one fact is very plain — the revolver went off somehow, and as there happened by the greatest ill-luck in the world to be one cartridge in the barrel, the revolver exploded, the bullet went into my brain and killed me dead. That is my whole plan. It is so simple and natural that everybody will believe it.'

Dr. Senior said that the revolver must have been held close to the head, as the wound was scorched. Death was due to haemorrhage of the brain. The jury returned a verdict of “Suicide whilst temporarily insane”.

Suicide meant to be effective has an awkward way of missing its effect In no single point did Burdekin's elaborate deception succeed. His letters, instead of convincing the jury of his sanity, had the opposite effect. They found, in fact, that he had committed suicide whilst temporarily insane.

South Australia Chronicle Sat 9 Feb 1895.
 
Commentary.

It must. I think, be concluded the writer has given a Sherlockian spin to events for, by contrast, The Age for February 2, 1895, recounts the tragedy with more factual detail and no mention of Holmes or Conan Doyle. Click HERE for that account.

 Without access to the many letters alluded to in both articles, it cannot be assumed Lloyd Burdekin modelled himself directly on the fictional detective.

The Antipodean newspapers of the time do however have some points of interest for the Sherlockian. I began to read them on-line in the fruitless search for evidence supporting the myth that London city clerks took to the streets with mourning bands on arms and hats to protest the "murder" of their favourite detective in The Final Problem.

In general, I found rather an understanding acceptance that Doyle wished rightly to turn his pen to other projects. Indeed, more than one commentator thought it long overdue. 

What is crystal clear, however, is that, by 1894, Doyle was world-famous and Sherlock Holmes had passed into the language. I read several stories of true crimes and mysteries reported in Australia and New Zealand in which either someone is congratulated for showing Holmesian acumen or regret is expressed that no Sherlock Holmes was on hand to solve the case. I've noted such references in contemporary American newspapers too.

The writer of the article transcribed above was, I sense, employing a readily-identifiable short-hand very familiar to readers in attributing to the young suicide 'a Sherlock Holmesian mind'.

Lloyd Burdekin comes across as well- educated, very intelligent, ingenious and given both to introspection and elaborate, fantastical webs of thought. He is alone, in another country, a drop-out from Oxford. Doubtless, if it were not for his father's standing and the bank manager's perseverance, he might have disappeared for ever with that mysterious removal to Thames Ditton.

We gather (for whatever reason) he posed as one 'Power', a tutor. He lead a modest, even frugal existence, without apparent worries...or friends, male or female.

These elements conspired to bring about such extremity of introspection that proportion and perspective were tragically lost.

It is worth pausing to consider a Holmes alone. Perhaps Jonny Lee Miller's portrayal in the CBS Elementary series illustrates a Sherlock at his most vulnerable. Without the participation in reality prompted by Joan Watson and Inspector Lestrade, there but for the grace of God was a potential Lloyd Burdekin.

It has always seemed to me that Watson (and for that matter, 221b and Mrs. Hudson) are intrinsic to the agency's success and health. They bring an everyday concreteness to the (necessary) abstractions of Holmesian thinking. Frequently experienced by Holmes as irritating, they function not only as conductors of light but just as importantly as trusted and loved fixed points earthing a friend and ensuring the Great Detective operates on an even keel.

Perhaps at root Lloyd Burdekin died of starvation from that social interaction Doctor Doyle instinctively saw as a necessary balance to thinking like Sherlock Holmes and embodied in Dr. Watson.     

Lucy Liu & Jonny Lee Miller - CBS Elementary's Watson & Holmes.